Appearance: 
  
 
Page:   
 Share It:
http://fiction.homepageofthedead.com/forum.pl?readfiction=1031H

Malaka
(© Biswapriya Purkayastha)

This contribution is part of a series:-
1. The Most Frightening Thing In The World (15-Dec-2010)
Given the right circumstances, love can be the most frightening thing of all.
2. Fun And Games (10-Jan-2011)
Why are children the best soldiers one can imagine? This is Part Two of the Bisaria Quartet, and follows 'The Most Frightening Thing In The World.'
3. Malaka (13-Feb-2011)
A girl wanders alone through a land ravaged by civil war.
4. The General (15-May-2011)
The General made a mistake when he spared the woman, and a worse mistake when he let her bear his child. This is the concluding part of the Bisaria Quartet.

Page 1

One day before her fourteenth birthday, Malakaís mother called her aside.

Malaka had a kind of vacation, because the school had closed down a week ago when the one remaining teacher had finally fled. She had been out on the red earth playground of the school, playing football with a few of her friends, when her mother had come and taken her home. She went under protest, bitterly arguing, her shorts and oversized T shirt flapping around her bony limbs as she gesticulated. But her mother had not even turned her head until they were both back home. She had even made Malaka change from her mud-stained clothes into a clean dress and wash her hands and feet properly. Then she had suddenly broken down.

"Listen," she said urgently, that gracious lady, kneeling on the floor before her daughter, tears in her eyes. "Listen," she repeated. "Tomorrow, weíre sending you to live with Aunt Koral in Keke."

"Why?" asked Malaka, astonished. "Tomorrow is my birthday. Why do I have to go to Aunt Koral? I donít even like Keke."

"Donít argue, baby, please." Her mother only called her "baby" when in the grip of powerful emotion. "Itís not safe for you here."

"Why? Is it the war?" The war had been coming closer for weeks, and the people were frightened and worried. Some of them spoke in hushed whispers about the atrocities the dreaded Karibu rebels were inflicting on the civilians they captured. Others had scoffed and said nothing like that ever happened. Everyone waited, unhappy and uncertain, for the fighting to reach them.

Her mother nodded, now. "Yes, the war. You donít have to worry about it.† Youíll be all right with Aunt Koral."

"But...what about you and father?"

"Well, weíll be coming, just as soon as he can arrange leave from his job." Malakaís father was an overseer at the tin mine near the town. It was an excellent job. Malakaís mother had been told many times over by various people how lucky she was to be the wife of a man with a job like that. It was not a job that could be lightly abandoned, even with the war. Besides, the victors Ė whoever they might be Ė would want the mine and would need people who knew how to run it. Malakaís father had explained this to her mother in great detail, over and over, during the last months.

"Itís just that your father canít get leave right away," Malakaís mother told her. "But weíll be coming soon enough, donít worry. Or if things settle down here, weíll just fetch you back."

"I donít want to leave you!" And for all her fourteen years and the maturity that came with being a teenager, Malaka burst into tears.

"I know, baby," her mother said unhappily. "I know."


The bus to Keke was overcrowded. It was always overcrowded, even at the best of times, but now it was so full that there were people riding on the roof and hanging on to the window bars. It was an old bus, for all that it was brightly coloured in green and blue with a yellow hood, and its ancient engine wheezed and groaned and made a grating pained noise when the driver changed gear. Inside, Malaka sat on one of the hard wooden benches between a fat old woman carrying a box in her lap and a thin man with a grizzled beard who coughed continuously into a grubby blue handkerchief. The driver was sharing his own small seat with a passenger and had to lean over between the manís legs to reach the gear lever.

Malakaís mother had put her on the bus. Her father was on a double shift at the mine, so she had not seen him since the previous day. Her mother had given her a small bundle, containing her good new dress and the football shorts and T shirt she played in, and a little food. She had also given Malaka some money, enough to pay the driver for her trip to Keke. Malaka had thrust the tattered orange and brown Bisarian shillings into her socks to keep them safe.

The crowd at the bus was so great there wasnít a chance to say goodbye. Malakaís mother had thrust her through the door and was instantly pushed away by more people frantic to climb on. Malaka had caught a glimpse of her mother over her shoulder, looking lost in the crowd for all her height and majestic carriage, and then she was inside the bus and lucky to find a little space to sit.

[ Continue to page 2 ]

-->

Information
Genre:General Horror
Type:Short story
Rating:6.75 / 10
Rated By:32 users
Comments: 3 users
Total Hits:8679

Follow Us
 Join us on Facebook to be notified of updates
 Follow us on Twitter to be notified of updates

Forum Discussion
 Now a stunt women dies on Dead Pool 2 ... »
 RIP, George Romero. :( »
 "We Should Eat Ice Cream Too" (short s... »
 Oculus Rift... »
 The coolest/best thing I've ever heard... »
 Rate the last movie you've seen »
 Twin Peaks. Season 3. »
 Blade Runner 2049 - first trailer rele... »
 Blood Drive (TV series) »
 Dawn(04) Collector's Edition Blu Ray »
 Mr Mercedes (TV Series) - Stephen King »
 Dark Tower film trilogy AND tv series. »
 TWD Season 8 Comic-Con Trailer »
 "Creepshow" (1982) »
 Nights of the Living Dead: An Anthology »
 So US folks... Clinton or Trump? »
 Walking Dead books 1-10 »
 Stranger Things 2 »
 What are you currently reading? »
 MZ's Movie Review Thread »