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Neil
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Subject: The opening ten minutes...Date: Mon 25-Jul-2005, 07:54:44

Loved them apart from:-
1) The little girl decided to bounce up (as if on wires). She should have crawled up more naturally.
2) The cliche thing of Ana's parter deciding to get "possessed" eyes when he turned. Why did he stop attacking when she went into the bathroom?

The opening ten mins were grand though! Very effective!


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